Post by Ahmed Johnson on Dec 26, 2001 0:18:29 GMT -5
Here's a little story I wrote nonstop earlier. It's mainly a jumbled bunch of nothing, and I haven't reread to see exactly whats there. But enjoy!
A man so entangled in his own jumbled life finds himself involved in some kind of scheme to make money. when the cops find out about the so called warehouse they storm the building and discover a most unusual sight. The man, has been eaten in half by some kind of creature. But what kind of creature was it? The rats cr4awled about the floor and the chiefs wife who came along for a ride storms out of the room in a state of rage. “I demand these rats be removed” she stammered. The chief who was deaf could hear none of this. His partner, tapped him on the shoulder to try to tell him his wife’s demands but the chief had drifted off into a day dream. His legs soon went weak and he fell onto the floor next to the half eaten carcass and the rats. The wife now re-entered the room and suspected that her husband was dead. She immediately began kissing the partner, with whom she had, undergone a long affair with. The partner, also assuming the chief had died made no attempt to stop the events from unfolding. An ambulance pulls up to the scene and an emt enters the room. He sees four bodies on the floor. Two are thought to be dead, and two are enganging in sexual relations. This sight is too much for the young emt and he rushes back to the ambulance where he speeds away. Soon dusk sets in and the two lovers are asleep, still completely naked. The chief awakes and sees his partner and his wife naked on the floor together. He can’t remember what is happening but immediately becomes outraged. Outside a gunfight erupts. The lovers awake and think they are having a nightmare. The wife’s dead husband has risen from the dead. Outside the gunfight ends. A tall handsome man enters the room. He has a gun, and has been shot in the side. He asks for someone to call the police. The partner screams “we are the police!” The chief is still coming in toward the wife and partner. The tall man is crying and says that he just murdered his best friend after he took a bullet from him. The chief is completely unaware of anything and punches his partner in the face. The wife runs over to the tall man. The chief turns around and sees that his wife is with another man. He is confused. But he rushes over to take out that guy as well. The chief gets shot in the chest and falls back onto the half eaten carcass. The woman, still naked, hugs the tall man, who we know learn is Bi Carl, the famous basketball player. He has just killed two people, and begins sobbing even more. The wife comforts him and begans seducing him. Suddenly the warehouse begins to shake. An Earthquake! Nothing is safe in the house, Bi snaps out of it and tries to run for cover. The wife is smashed underneath the falling ceiling just barely not reaching safety. Bi is trapped alone in the warehouse. It is now pitch black out. No one would find him at least until morning. He is losing blood fast and lies down. He goes unconcious. He dreams of all his basketball glory. And then his dreams turn to nightmares and his eyes jolt open. He is outside his friend stands before him. He has a gun. He watches as his friend squeezes the trigger ever so gently. Everything is silent. The bullet whizzes right into his side. He falls to the ground. He’s been shot. His natural reaction is to grab his gun and shoot back at his friend. He is a good shot. His friend falls instantly. Bi is now in a panic state. A warehouse is in sight, and maybe he can find some help there. He rushes into the door, but the place is in shambles. Something bad has happened there. There are body parts about the floor as well as blood. He vomits. He lies down on the ground and begins to cry. Sirens can be heard. The cops arrive shortly and cuff him just inside the warehouse. The ground begins shaking violently, and the building collapses smashing to the officer and Bi. His partner is checking the body on the ground outside. He witnesses the whole thing. He rushes to the car and calls for immediate backup. The radio does not work.
THE END
SUNSHINESTATELINE
A man so entangled in his own jumbled life finds himself involved in some kind of scheme to make money. when the cops find out about the so called warehouse they storm the building and discover a most unusual sight. The man, has been eaten in half by some kind of creature. But what kind of creature was it? The rats cr4awled about the floor and the chiefs wife who came along for a ride storms out of the room in a state of rage. “I demand these rats be removed” she stammered. The chief who was deaf could hear none of this. His partner, tapped him on the shoulder to try to tell him his wife’s demands but the chief had drifted off into a day dream. His legs soon went weak and he fell onto the floor next to the half eaten carcass and the rats. The wife now re-entered the room and suspected that her husband was dead. She immediately began kissing the partner, with whom she had, undergone a long affair with. The partner, also assuming the chief had died made no attempt to stop the events from unfolding. An ambulance pulls up to the scene and an emt enters the room. He sees four bodies on the floor. Two are thought to be dead, and two are enganging in sexual relations. This sight is too much for the young emt and he rushes back to the ambulance where he speeds away. Soon dusk sets in and the two lovers are asleep, still completely naked. The chief awakes and sees his partner and his wife naked on the floor together. He can’t remember what is happening but immediately becomes outraged. Outside a gunfight erupts. The lovers awake and think they are having a nightmare. The wife’s dead husband has risen from the dead. Outside the gunfight ends. A tall handsome man enters the room. He has a gun, and has been shot in the side. He asks for someone to call the police. The partner screams “we are the police!” The chief is still coming in toward the wife and partner. The tall man is crying and says that he just murdered his best friend after he took a bullet from him. The chief is completely unaware of anything and punches his partner in the face. The wife runs over to the tall man. The chief turns around and sees that his wife is with another man. He is confused. But he rushes over to take out that guy as well. The chief gets shot in the chest and falls back onto the half eaten carcass. The woman, still naked, hugs the tall man, who we know learn is Bi Carl, the famous basketball player. He has just killed two people, and begins sobbing even more. The wife comforts him and begans seducing him. Suddenly the warehouse begins to shake. An Earthquake! Nothing is safe in the house, Bi snaps out of it and tries to run for cover. The wife is smashed underneath the falling ceiling just barely not reaching safety. Bi is trapped alone in the warehouse. It is now pitch black out. No one would find him at least until morning. He is losing blood fast and lies down. He goes unconcious. He dreams of all his basketball glory. And then his dreams turn to nightmares and his eyes jolt open. He is outside his friend stands before him. He has a gun. He watches as his friend squeezes the trigger ever so gently. Everything is silent. The bullet whizzes right into his side. He falls to the ground. He’s been shot. His natural reaction is to grab his gun and shoot back at his friend. He is a good shot. His friend falls instantly. Bi is now in a panic state. A warehouse is in sight, and maybe he can find some help there. He rushes into the door, but the place is in shambles. Something bad has happened there. There are body parts about the floor as well as blood. He vomits. He lies down on the ground and begins to cry. Sirens can be heard. The cops arrive shortly and cuff him just inside the warehouse. The ground begins shaking violently, and the building collapses smashing to the officer and Bi. His partner is checking the body on the ground outside. He witnesses the whole thing. He rushes to the car and calls for immediate backup. The radio does not work.
THE END
SUNSHINESTATELINE
